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Thursday, 13 July 2017

Winter Learning Journey Day 6 Activity 1

New Zealand

Navigating the rough water
Each and every new dawn
We hope to finally meet this luscious land


Zigzagging through all of the different regions

Engulfed in an array of colours
Awestruck because of it's beauty
Life afresh with a new hope
A fresh chance...a new beginning
Nurture balances with nature
Dreams become reality.

8 comments:

jolie said...

Kia Ora Harrison

I enjoyed reading youre poem. I like the bit when you said "Zigzagging through all of the different regions." I really visualized that bit. Keep up the great work my friend :)

Harrison said...

Hello Jolie

Thankyou for all of your positive comments.

Vedel @ Glen Innes School said...

Hey Harrison
Your poem is really good. How did you come up with your ideas?
Great work :) ;)

Nicky Bloy said...

Harrison,

What a fabulous poem! You have used such wonderful vocabulary to describe your experience... luscious, awestruck, engulfed... Awesome!

And yes, what a dream come true to be the first person to discover New Zealand!

Nice!

Nicky

Harrison said...

Hello Vedel
Thank you for all of you positive comments. They have really made me think on how I can make my writing even better.

Harrison said...

Hello Nicky
Thank you for all of you positive comments. They have really made me think on how I can make my writing even better.

daniel said...

Hi Harrison
Your poem about being the first person to arrive at Shag point is great. I enjoyed every part of it. Keep up the good work.
Daniel

Limiteti @ Glen Innes School said...

Hi Harrison,

Your poem was amazing! I loved the strong vocabulary that you had in there, I loved reading it, keep up the great work!

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